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    dots Submission Name: .::Silence::.dots
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    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 775
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    dots.::Silence::.dots
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    I look around.
    I'll tell you what I see.
    A room full of people
    that already hate me.

    They don't know me
    can't see that I'm good.
    It's all because I'm quiet
    that I'm misuderstood.

    They can't see
    the way I think
    All they know
    is my social skills stink.

    This is what they use
    when they jugde you
    mind you now,
    what they say ain't true.

    You know what it means
    to sit quietly
    To watch those around you
    scream voilently.

    It shows that you're distant
    maybe thinking you're better
    but the reality is,
    You just ain't a fretter

    You don't let the little things
    get in your way.
    All this pointless screaming
    will end someday.




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