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    dots Submission Name: Sabbaticaldots

    Author: Mandolin
    ASL Info:    10/15/89
    Elite Ratio:    5.4 - 131/145/85
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Depressed
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    What to depend on,
    when any minute
    anything can change, anything can go?

    When do I let go
    of all I have hoped for?

    A fugitive running from reality,

    And I didn't know your face anymore;

    Afraid to touch
    what I adore.
    It's just the place I am looking for.

    Submitted on 2008-09-19 03:35:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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