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    dots Submission Name: forgetful memorydots
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    Author: darkonesgirl
    ASL Info:    21/f/sc
    Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 233/245/125
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Fuck it all
    Total Views: 516
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    Description:
       we all have a forgetful memory just no one really likes to talk about it


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    dotsforgetful memorydots
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    have you ever thought of something
    and ment to tell someone
    and then forget
    what it was
    isnt that frustrating
    i do it all the time
    except i forget
    other things as well
    its like this poem
    was ment to be longer
    but DAMN IT
    i done forgot
    the words ment
    for this FUCKING paper
    so forget the words i write
    forget the pain in my eyes
    and forget this
    God forsaken poem i write
    because ill never finish it
    it will always be
    unfinished and lonely
    half way done
    because of my FUCKING FORGETFUL MEMORY




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