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    dots Submission Name: goodnight racheldots
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    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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       incognito?
    i try to be.
    but hey.

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    dotsgoodnight racheldots
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    these hills
    of avalon

    you spoke in
    autumn song

    red earth
    goodnight

    open your fingers
    and dream of me

    eyes in the crook
    of your arm

    hair unbound
    and oceanic

    feathers
    and more feathers

    trailing
    and smooth-soft




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