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There is a Place


Author: The Gadfly
ASL Info:    52/M/Moreno Valley, CA
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Words: 275
Class/Type: Lyrics /Love
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A praise song.


There is a Place



There is a place I want to go,
a peaceful place I long to know.
No other place, so far from here;
in light so bright, in air so clear.
There is a place.

There is a place where dreams come true;
a lovely place, in dreams of You.
From on my knees each whispered prayer
echoes the hills and mountains there.
There is a place.

High on a hill it shines so bright
and all I see is filled with light
And I AM here, I am indeed.
There is no doubt of what I need.
My Lord, my God, in truth and grace.
My hope, my joy here in this place.
This is that place.

There is a place I long to be,
from shining shore, God calls to me,
“Come in, My child, come in and rest.
This is the place. Come taste the best.
This is the place.”

High on a hill it shines so bright
and all I see is filled with light
And I AM here, I am indeed.
There is no doubt of what I need.
My Lord, my God, in truth and grace.
My hope, my joy here in this place.
This is that place.

No other place was meant to be,
my Lord, my God keeps calling me.
No other place was meant to be,
my Lord, my God keeps calling me.

There is a throne. I know it stands;
a work unknown to human hands.
I AM, I AM, my God, my King,
my heart’s desire is everything.
You are that place.

You are that place.




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  Greg, this was a very moving and wonderful piece! I love the lyrics and the feeling "IT" gives me about real security and love.

Awesome!
love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
tif ~*~
| Posted on 2008-09-25 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
  Makes ya happy, gratefully happy, Good jog
Kevin
| Posted on 2008-09-21 00:00:00 | by every48seconds | [ Reply to This ]
  THIS WAS A BEAUTIFUL POEM. RELIGIOUS POETRY IS ALWAYS SO STRONG AND SELF ASURED THAT IT MAKES YOU WANT TO DO SOMETHING "RIGHT" OR GIVE UP SOMETHING "WRONG" * *ashes blunt* *

GREAT WRITE
llcollins
| Posted on 2008-09-20 00:00:00 | by L.L.COLLINS | [ Reply to This ]


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