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    dots Submission Name: There is a Placedots
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    Author: The Gadfly
    ASL Info:    52/M/Moreno Valley, CA
    Elite Ratio:    3.55 - 1048/1348/375
    Words: 275
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 852
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1564



    Description:
       A praise song.


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    dotsThere is a Placedots
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    There is a place I want to go,
    a peaceful place I long to know.
    No other place, so far from here;
    in light so bright, in air so clear.
    There is a place.

    There is a place where dreams come true;
    a lovely place, in dreams of You.
    From on my knees each whispered prayer
    echoes the hills and mountains there.
    There is a place.

    High on a hill it shines so bright
    and all I see is filled with light
    And I AM here, I am indeed.
    There is no doubt of what I need.
    My Lord, my God, in truth and grace.
    My hope, my joy here in this place.
    This is that place.

    There is a place I long to be,
    from shining shore, God calls to me,
    “Come in, My child, come in and rest.
    This is the place. Come taste the best.
    This is the place.”

    High on a hill it shines so bright
    and all I see is filled with light
    And I AM here, I am indeed.
    There is no doubt of what I need.
    My Lord, my God, in truth and grace.
    My hope, my joy here in this place.
    This is that place.

    No other place was meant to be,
    my Lord, my God keeps calling me.
    No other place was meant to be,
    my Lord, my God keeps calling me.

    There is a throne. I know it stands;
    a work unknown to human hands.
    I AM, I AM, my God, my King,
    my heart’s desire is everything.
    You are that place.

    You are that place.




    Submitted on 2008-09-20 14:09:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Greg, this was a very moving and wonderful piece! I love the lyrics and the feeling "IT" gives me about real security and love.

    Awesome!
    love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    tif ~*~
    | Posted on 2008-09-25 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Makes ya happy, gratefully happy, Good jog
    Kevin
    | Posted on 2008-09-21 00:00:00 | by every48seconds | [ Reply to This ]
      THIS WAS A BEAUTIFUL POEM. RELIGIOUS POETRY IS ALWAYS SO STRONG AND SELF ASURED THAT IT MAKES YOU WANT TO DO SOMETHING "RIGHT" OR GIVE UP SOMETHING "WRONG" * *ashes blunt* *

    GREAT WRITE
    llcollins
    | Posted on 2008-09-20 00:00:00 | by L.L.COLLINS | [ Reply to This ]


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