Placenta by jupitercrash

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Submission Name: Placenta dots

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Author:	jupitercrash
ASL Info:	15 female Alabama
Elite Ratio:	2.83 - 1/5/3
Words:	60

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	142
Average Vote:	4.0000
Bytes:	353

Description:
um.. well this is a very odd piece of work and I really want your honesty. This poem is about ethics.

Placenta dots

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Birth to death in just a few hours
Not to worry she’s me too.
Now we have the power
To make two.
So you can come back for more
Fingers stroking my placenta
Drop me in a cup
Watch me grow up
You could kill me
Give me
Walls made of cement
Close my eyes at the 13th hour.

Submitted on 2008-09-20 18:29:42 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!

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Interesting.

I like it,but I can't really put my finger on what or why.

The first thing that came to mind when I began reading this was abortion and test-tube babies.The word you put here paint an interesting picture even though there isn't many words to read which is good! Don't panic about that! I could see a lab and scientists,technicians,whatever,etc injected the eggs.If you've have ever watched a documentary about that (or cloning which is like the same thing), then you'll understand what I'm talking about.I could see the partial-births taking place which is literally "birth to death" in a matter of hours or even minutes actually.Partial-births are a rather disturbing concept since the baby has entered the world,they just kill it before it's head comes out or it takes it first breath of air.

I could clearly see the question of ethics here.People are challenged with it everyday. America harps on the principle of ethics constantly. Trust me! I didn't realize how much unitl I started taking Cosmetology. I'll have to let you take a look at my cosmetolgy books to show you. There's even weirder (and worse) books out there. I think I have at least three.

This code of ethics that we supposedly swear by are generally goodhearted and wellmeaning,but they suggest fakeness and dishonesty.The code forgets that we're not robots,but we're living beings. The code also controls what we deem acceptable or inappropiate (insulting,etc). Personally I believe that we choose what find distracting,unacceptable,etc and we won't live passed it. We won't discuss it,it becomes taboo.It's stupid is what is.

Don't ever be controlled by what some other person thinks. It's hard,I admit,but it's not impossible. Go against the mold. Truthfully that's what faith is all about.You'll hear in churches services how obedience is the key.No,it isn't. The key is faith. If you really believe in something, you'll have faith in it no matter what. =]

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