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    dots Submission Name: Hatred for the Fortunate.dots

    Author: xXCptn_SephyXx
    ASL Info:    22/f/PA
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 46/119/104
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsHatred for the Fortunate.dots

    No good to anyone;
    Dancing around the dying of spirit,
    Forever bound by the distress of life.

    Everything in your soul is perfect,
    Your face flawless;
    Smile with glee
    As the whips of disappointment marry the backó
    Lashing out,
    Over and over until a stream of renewal flows freely.

    Singing upbeat lyrics
    As the one you don ugly
    Receives endless sessions of a rose
    Raping every inch their corpse.
    You sicken me.

    Life is perfect for you,
    It is a universe
    And you are its Queen.
    Until one day I shall return from the vestibule,
    And drag your soul into the pits of hell by the neck.

    Submitted on 2008-09-21 03:56:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      When i read the title, i thought it would have been a general picture of not liking those who have more luck in something than you. I thought you would have expressed your frustration from being less fortunate in whatever it may be....

    This is specific and i liked it though the dragging part kinda scared me even though if i am to be truthful to myself, i'd most likely do the same. But it's something that i'm not gonna admit to. I prefer to be in denial. You seem to have more strength in writing it down. So i applaud you.

    I think it's a good self expression type of poem. You got all your ideas out and you ended it with what your intentions might be.

    Hope you're having a good day....

    Take care.....

    | Posted on 2008-09-22 00:00:00 | by charmedidentity | [ Reply to This ]

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