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    dots Submission Name: I Trieddots
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    Author: Rachierage
    Elite Ratio:    0.19 - 0/2/2
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsI Trieddots
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    I tried for you,
    I tried for me,
    Even all the things I couldn't see,
    I tried to love myself,
    I tried to not care,
    I tried not to share,
    I guess this all got the best of me,
    I guess all is left of now is me left at sea,
    So take the time to say goodbye,
    Take the time to leave me behind,
    Forget all the things I've said and leave me blind,
    So Forget me, as I forget you,
    I'll try to get through all of this too,
    So now here I go, here I sway,
    To the bends of all the waves,
    So here I am, as I've cried,
    Now all I can say is I tried,




    Submitted on 2008-09-21 09:16:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Good write, the rhyming is nice i always try to make mine rhyme but it hardly works...
    "Take the time to leave me behind,
    Forget all the things I've said and leave me blind,
    So Forget me, as I forget you,
    I'll try to get through all of this too,"

    the wording is amazing.... you've seemed to put in the right word at the right time.
    letting go is extremely hard especially if the other end hasn't yet. i hope it gets easier..

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    | Posted on 2008-09-23 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]



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