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It was our first night out on the town. God, we were out of our minds And totally lost. I didn't know their language And neither did he So we begged of lines and symbols on a map To guide us around this strange place So far from home. It was our first night out on the town. We stumbled from cheerful hostel walls Into a more colorful darkness And started up again out of bed Like confused ghosts slinking across the angular shadows Gazing up at bizarrely intricate buildings Whose very existences were due to a mind Questioned to be prophetic or insane. Jesus, cubically rendered, Stared down still as stone from the rafters Offering no protection. (And as if to justify our vision, Dalí sprang forth terribly, six feet tall from a wall With eerie vacant eyes bulging from a chiseled gray face That presumed only chaos.) We wandered upon a line And decided to wait, not caring where it led. Trying to meld with the crowd, We bought Estrellas, like the locals drank, And talked in low English voices Lest we become visible To the line one hundred units long. Realizing it was not so much a perfect line As a writhing organic S Of shifting ruddy faces that laughed And cried and dropped to their knees in the street And fell off drunken tottering heels And chattered with sparkling eyes in a proud language, And kissed and shared cigarettes And recognized— In each curve of their human faces a reminder That we weren’t all that far from home. - September 6, 2008 |
i completely dig the ones that take me there. that let me see it. hear it...etc.etc. you get the point. this is super good stuff. (sheesh that sounds dumb...but) "into a more colorful darkness" "presumed only chaos" (that is just perfect) "writhing organic S" (highlights.) and my goodness, the ending.... mmmm... glues the whole thing together and places a pretty little bow on top... this takes me there. i have no complaints. (sorry?) | Posted on 2008-09-23 00:00:00 | by ever | [ Reply to This ] | |