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    dots Submission Name: Thoughts from the Liddots
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    Author: Guermo
    ASL Info:    18 / M / Va, USA
    Elite Ratio:    4.3 - 133/156/112
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 96
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    dotsThoughts from the Liddots
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    A brilliant feeling comes from inside,
    Pointing a heart towards a freedom of worry,
    Letting you know where you’re meant to be,
    All other thoughts, quickly become blurry.

    It’s given its all, absolution of mind,
    Out of the hand, flows words from the eye,
    Observations of sight, thoughts from the lid,
    The lines stay pure, never on paper a lie.

    Will the end be what the beginning is for?
    A life sustained by words on a page.
    In truth it doesn’t matter, success or not,
    The important part is it was a life that was made.




    Submitted on 2008-09-21 22:06:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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