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i miss you


Author: truefruit06
ASL Info:    14/m/IN
Elite Ratio:    1.5 - 6 /22 /44
Words: 89
Class/Type: Lyrics /Death
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one of my newest songs maybe you'll hear it one day (with music) this goes to someone i loved who recently passed i miss them so much


i miss you



so now your away
for a little while
but i'm not gonna fret
so just keep your smile

I'll be there in a short time
so please just wait for me
and just take some time

but now i wanna say my goodbye

I'll miss you
I'll miss your smile
that you'll shed a tear
every once in a while.

Its ok
I'll be alright
but i want you to know
I just want you to know
I'll miss you
sha lalalalalalahaa
I miss you




Submitted on 2008-09-24 15:23:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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