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    dots Submission Name: Walk Togetherdots
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    Author: nicodemous
    ASL Info:    26/M/Hell
    Elite Ratio:    5.89 - 240/168/100
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 127
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    dotsWalk Togetherdots
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    We walk together this night

    I watch you as you bath in the moonlight

    I put my arm around you shoulder

    But remove it quickly to show it is just a friendly gesture

    I find excuses to play with your hair

    I place my hand on your back

    But this is not where I want to be

    I want to wrap my arms around your waist

    I want to hold you endlessly till the dawn

    To kiss you so sweetly

    To look into your eyes and know I am yours

    Which isn’t far form the truth

    Though you may not realize it

    I truly am yours completely

    And that is all I really need to be happy




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      It's crazy to hear a guy right like this.

    Coming from a girls stand-point completely i say the following;
    Many times we go out into the world thinking that we are the only ones letting our guards down, the only ones that may get hurt. We think that you(as men) have it easy, that you never get emotionally involved the way that we do. That you never notice the small things that we do for you. The 5 extra minutes we take to condition our hair so that it feels oh so soft, just for that one time that your hand may "accidently" brush our hair.

    I guess, what i am trying to say is, it is great to see a male's perspective. It's great to know that there is a guy out there that actually puts himself out there to love...to give himself completely.

    I think that the amount of heart that you put into this piece is evident and I want to thank you for that. I love that your writing is filled with so much emotion...I think that most people over think there writing and feel that they have to fill their paper with big words and analogies...but, you..... you just put your thoughts and emotions out there for us to read. So thank you, thank you for your honesty.
    | Posted on 2009-02-12 00:00:00 | by longwinterdays | [ Reply to This ]



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