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    dots Submission Name: Sunrise ALL Wrightdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Prose/Nature
    Total Views: 551
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 349



    Description:
       Wrights's Lake, CA - Hwy 50 E to Tahoe - a side road and an adventure later!

    A bald eagle dove for a fish breakfast!

    Rock ON ES!!!

    tif ~*~
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    dotsSunrise ALL Wrightdots
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    Serentiy and Color
    Capture divine
    movements
    of dawn

    A moment...
    Sun eclipses
    Night
    The lake
    is a lighted
    reflection

    Bald Eagle
    dives Golden waters
    And, dressed
    together
    in
    the morning
    ALL
    IS
    ONE




    Submitted on 2008-09-24 23:28:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is a beautiful and serene, plus delightful poem, full of word pictures and nature! Nothing more beautiful and inspiring than dawn over the lake!

    Nice work, pretty lady!
    | Posted on 2008-09-25 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      I loved how it just transitioned into:

    "ALL
    IS
    ONE"

    That's superb. Spiritual and meaningful.

    "Everything he has made pretty in its time." - Eccl 3:11

    You have a way of bringing the beauty of nature to all of us. True, I can do so as well. But most of the time I'm still writing in the city. I like the city.

    But I do appreciate the "serenity and colour" of the dawn, of the day, of the night, etc. Let's go sing in the rainy meadow.
    | Posted on 2008-09-25 00:00:00 | by AsiaticFox | [ Reply to This ]
      What an awesome scene you've captured! You took me there to watch, but now I'm back to reality which really is an okay place to be, too. Keep smiling, Sharon
    | Posted on 2008-09-24 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]


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