What Can't Be Seen. by BestxDeceptions

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Author:	BestxDeceptions
ASL Info:	18, Female, Kentucky.
Elite Ratio:	2.4 - 22/49/41
Words:	69

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	130
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	465

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What Can't Be Seen. dots

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This silence is bleeding,
Spilling to an octave
much higher than this place.
Would you kill it,
spitting shards into this wound?

I need some solace
when the day dies down.
My eyes glued shut
and my wishes granted;
My arms full.

If all fails,
The world shall turn numb,
make me promises, so I beg.
I have the ability
to believe what can't be seen

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you broke the mirror. poe
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