You write very large with small words and a short paragraph. It is like a personification of an action. That action being fishing of course. I also like how I had to read downward, vice reading across. I know it seems small, but I don't think it would have felt as epic had I read in a different way. KUDOS
How wonderful nature's beauty is in the eye of one who sees it clearly! Beautiful scene---and even more lovely to know you shared some precious time with your father surrounded by the great outdoors. :-) Sharon
The Spirit Of The Lake and the Spirit Fish embrace you in a union of mankind and nature! And, may their embrace always be as inspiring and delightful as your excellent poem! I grew up in the Out of Doors, and love poems with a nature theme. Your poem is just excellent, and delightfully dispenses a mood of appreciation of nature and the outdoors!