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    dots Submission Name: I'm trapped in darknessdots
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    Author: Jaymz
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 2/5/61
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsI'm trapped in darknessdots
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    I'm trapped in darkness
    get me out
    I cannot take this anymore
    the ongoing pain
    the neverending sadness
    my family leaving me alone
    I don't know why it ended
    I don't know why life stopped
    all I know is I must get out
    get out of this ongoing darkness
    no matter what I try to do
    I keep on thinking of death
    it always seems
    the best way to go
    but something always
    holds me back
    I'm trapped in darkness
    maybe forever
    but I hope to god
    that Iam mistaken




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