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    dots Submission Name: When I'm with youdots
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    Author: Jaymz
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 2/5/61
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsWhen I'm with youdots
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    I love you in every single way
    I love you no matter what they say
    when I'm with you
    you make me complete
    when I'm with you
    you lift me off my feet
    you fill in the hole in my heart
    I cannot tell you
    how great you are
    I feel so wonderful
    when your around
    when I'm with you
    I'm never down
    but the fear of losing you
    is so terrible
    it is simply unbearable




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