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    dots Submission Name: Oh Soul ~*~dots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 18
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 613
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    Description:
       Ah, the changing of seasons inspires colorful appreciations!
    Sending out lots of love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    tif ~*~


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    dotsOh Soul ~*~dots
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    Oh Soul ~*~
    Singing divine
    words

    Translating
    Heart

    Transcending
    Mind

    Tributary
    Universal
    Love
    Song ~*~~*~




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      There seems to be a wave form enclosed in this piece and I like that.
    It just moves spirit in a unique way Tif.

    I did my yoga today it got my body zooming in the same way, as playing music does also. Ahh the blisses we choose to patronize do us well.

    Love,

    Nan
    | Posted on 2008-10-08 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
      I hope the last stanza is not a reversed acrostic. :P

    The poem is very serene... rephreshing... and wordly delicious. :)
    | Posted on 2008-09-30 00:00:00 | by -Lith-Ium- | [ Reply to This ]
      This is just plain lovely, with lots of spirit and soul! Nice work, pretty lady!

    I love Autumn and Fall most of all. Here in Dallas, we don't have the beautiful changing foliage colors, but the weather is fantastic!

    | Posted on 2008-09-26 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      Your joy with, and appreciation of, nature sings through the lines of your poetry. The simplicity of this write makes each word's value linger long after the reading is done. Happy Autumn! :-) Sharon
    | Posted on 2008-09-26 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      Very beautiful, very resounding within the caverns of the heart.

    "To make oneself the wind.
    To fly madly through golden hair.
    To know the death of seasons, and weep."
    -The Sky Messenger Delivers the Apple of Sorrow, Asiaticfox

    ^_^ I just wrote that right now. Tiff, all of your new pieces are inspiring me to write little bits of beauty and sorrow. Thank you.

    Beauty and sorrow. Both completely different, and yet, I find, both exactly the same.

    "Tributary
    Universal
    Love
    Song"

    That's brilliant. Utterly brilliant. I think the word 'tributary' seems to bring the whole piece together. It also relates to the change of seasons. Time, as if water, rushes sadly through the tributaries to the sea. The sea of winter. It swims for an eternity, and then evaporates and pours down on the mountaintop, ready to descend once again.

    The tributary of seasons.

    ~Asiaticfox
    | Posted on 2008-09-26 00:00:00 | by AsiaticFox | [ Reply to This ]


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