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    dots Submission Name: ANGEL'Sdots

    Author: layDsayD
    ASL Info:    29/f/florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 264/243/147
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    Nameless faces
    Wonder in
    No one sees
    No one knows
    My soul silently screams
    Reaching for them
    All of them
    My scattered angels
    Iím so lost
    But there is solstice in knowing they are found
    Its is sometimes hard to breath without them

    Submitted on 2008-09-26 00:48:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hi, i like it. poe
    | Posted on 2008-09-26 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]

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