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    dots Submission Name: Love Entombeddots
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    Author: Sirbongatron
    ASL Info:    19/M/NC
    Elite Ratio:    4.74 - 19/18/21
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 43
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    dotsLove Entombeddots
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    Deep in the thralls, of love entombed
    There rests an angel; chained in gloom.
    Her raven locks are satin and curled,
    Flickering flames dance and whirl;
    Arabic eyes, melting sapphire pearls—
    (Though crimson trails expose!)

    She walks in the valley, beneath October Moon,
    Pallid, mystic; soul’s slave African drums.
    I dream of her, through thick clawing fog,
    Smell her sweet, angelic fragrance;
    Imbue and warm,
    February’s dull thumping heart.

    I trail her path, through jaded fields;
    Wings tattered; the siren’s howl echoes aloud.
    For dreams of stars, and
    Fantasy.
    Are only for the hollow feeling,
    Of love.
    Of thunderstorms in September,
    Deep in the thralls—
    Drowning, in love entombed.




    Submitted on 2008-09-26 01:47:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A good lilting epitaph even an eulogy to a love that's been. The piece doesn't actually tell me if the person is living or dead. But all the same, whether it be one or the other there's an awful empty ache when a beloved one leaves only a sweet memory. I like this piece. It's flowery words give a deep personal feel to me.
    | Posted on 2008-09-26 00:00:00 | by realpoet | [ Reply to This ]



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