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    dots Submission Name: pins "n" needlesdots
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    Author: jermwerm
    ASL Info:    26/m/FRESNO CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.29 - 203/268/83
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    Pins "n" needles,
    hit an run.
    Taste of breath,
    content to cum.

    spoons of stillness,
    catching rain.
    feast of awe,
    I feel no shame.

    lust of thrust,
    Embrace fullness.
    Pins "n" needles,
    shoot it up.

    threaded buttons.
    tethered rush.
    So capital,
    for shard I love.





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      I didnt think this was about shooting up until the end. Let me know if I was wrong.

    Spoons of stillness catching rain


    I like that line a lot.
    As for the rest of the piece I can't say much I don't have experience there. Done some things but never that.
    | Posted on 2014-12-14 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]


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