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    dots Submission Name: amongst the wetness of the coming seadots

    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 179
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsamongst the wetness of the coming seadots

    the boom continues
    spawned in dawns remaining splendor;
    reminders of trudged sand,
    the wakefull beats that birthed a tantric rhythm
    where our bodies touched,
    excited by the strangeness of tides,
    elongated by the milky, distant moon
    which allowed the fragrant seafoams
    to explore our folding toes
    amongst the wetness of the coming sea.

    the beach beneath us
    writhed into a thousand passageways
    of subterranean paradises,
    each with their own hidden jewels
    that rose to surface,
    pinks & the reds of early passion
    vividly pursuing the curves
    of horizontal communication.
    there was a palace,
    enriched like the sweetness of plum,
    towering into an atmosphere
    of unattended gardens.

    this is where we buried the treasures
    of the heart,
    where we redefined the motion
    of the heavens far above us
    & below all this, we continued on,
    aware that the moistness
    of the coming air would awaken us
    from what seemed like a century's worth of dreams.
    hand in hand,
    we found our way through deserts
    towards the clay,
    softened by the firmness of walking home.

    Submitted on 2008-09-26 13:03:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      the boom continues... had me from the start. not a single comment on this? that's just not right. before i go ahead and add this to the bejeweled neck of my lovely faves list: this is completely me and the way my train track rumbles but; the second, or middle stanza had me thinking thoughts of, well, horizontal communication, then we got tangled in unattended gardens and... hahaha... nevermind.
    i like this.
    | Posted on 2009-05-09 00:00:00 | by ma | [ Reply to This ]

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