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Mr. Bogatu


Author: danni_amazing
ASL Info:    17/F/Pa
Elite Ratio:    1.49 - 1 /3 /8
Words: 136
Class/Type: Misc /Broken
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A song i wrote a few years ago.
I Garuntee if you heard how it goes you'd love it.


Mr. Bogatu



He's flipping out
He's throwing paper on the floor
He's going wild
He's tryna walk out the door
He's mad as hell
Don't wanna go back to jail
For beating his wife..


Crazy is the way that you put it
His guess is that you just misunderstood him
He doesn't want to be mad but sometimes he's got to
This is the song about Mr. Bogatu.

She's crying now
She's upset she wants him out
She doesn't understand why he's always gotta shout
She's got pain and suffering in his eyes
Whatever happens she just doesn't wanna dye

Crazy is the way that you put it
His guess is that u just misunderstood him
He doesn't want to be mad but sometimes he's got to
This is the song about Mr. Bogatu




Submitted on 2008-09-27 17:07:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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