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Somewhere I Belong


Author: danni_amazing
ASL Info:    17/F/Pa
Elite Ratio:    1.49 - 1 /3 /8
Words: 97
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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Somewhere I Belong



I see the rainbows being covered with black clouds and red rain drops.
It's somewhere I belong.
I feel the cold mashmellow wind flow through my hair and past my thin perfectly shaped body on the gumdrop hill top.
It's somewhere I belong.
I imagine a world of peace and love. Hope and Justice.
It's where I belong.
I am the dealer of bilingual relationships and for that, my own race turned it's back on me and walked towards ignorance.
It's somewhere I belong.
My writing is unique and deficult but over all..
It's somewhere I belong.




Submitted on 2008-09-27 17:19:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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