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    dots Submission Name: Awe-inspiringdots
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    Author: JiminyCricket
    Elite Ratio:    1.49 - 0/1/20
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    It was the day of days,
    Today, the day I saw light,
    That all darkness hadn’t left,
    Her smile made me glow,
    Like the youth of a new born,
    To see her shine it was surely divine,
    To which I could only respond with love and grace,
    It was the break of ice,
    A possible melt,
    But surely not the last freeze,
    Her awe-inspiring beauty,
    An image I shall never forget,
    All bringing joy to my heart.





    Submitted on 2008-09-28 00:39:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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