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    Author: armand
    Elite Ratio:    3.42 - 1173/1189/206
    Words: 43
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1007
    Average Vote:    3.0000
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       nothing at all to this rough as hell which is fine and dandy haven't wrote anything since we lost everything we have in the floods here in Iowa




    Ever feel as if your whole life is running uphill


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    I think i missed my chance to speak
    and so i change for the ones I love
    after the deal I made with God FOR DIVINE LOVE of the devil and the things I care not to see with these two eyes




    Submitted on 2008-09-29 00:49:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      just because no one knows what to say is not to say that those have not been there........perhaps that they have and no not what to say for themselves........the intention alone is beautiful.....i wish someone with the words would give them. just have hope my friend.......and forgive me if i have misinterpreted your work.......but that hill can be climbed...not to say i have ever reached its top, but that well idk.......thanks for posting is all i can say with clarity......
    | Posted on 2008-12-09 00:00:00 | by Skillessbasterd | [ Reply to This ]


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