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Author:	armand
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Words:	43

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nothing at all to this rough as hell which is fine and dandy haven't wrote anything since we lost everything we have in the floods here in Iowa

Ever feel as if your whole life is running uphill

untitled dots

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I think i missed my chance to speak
and so i change for the ones I love
after the deal I made with God FOR DIVINE LOVE of the devil and the things I care not to see with these two eyes

Submitted on 2008-09-29 00:49:35 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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just because no one knows what to say is not to say that those have not been there........perhaps that they have and no not what to say for themselves........the intention alone is beautiful.....i wish someone with the words would give them. just have hope my friend.......and forgive me if i have misinterpreted your work.......but that hill can be climbed...not to say i have ever reached its top, but that well idk.......thanks for posting is all i can say with clarity......
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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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It means a lot to them, as it does to you.