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Where am I

Author: truefruit06
ASL Info:    14/m/IN
Elite Ratio:    1.5 - 6 /22 /44
Words: 90
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Where am I

I hide in the darkness
scared to death
looking at those pair of eyes
staring me down
Eating my fear

I shroud in the shadows
lurking in the dark
wandering through the unchaging scenes
and the eyes that never go off of me

My lip quivers at the sight
my legs begin to shake
my head begins to pound
my heart said to burst

The sadness that is felt
that will never goes away
it is all seen in those
2 red eyes. starring me down

Submitted on 2008-09-29 12:50:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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