[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: untitleddots

    Author: NixLacus
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 5/11/24
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 581
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 528

       God knows why I wrote it but I did so here it is to share



    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.


    Once again I dive in deep
    Once again I blindly thought you might be different
    I knew straight away of your lies
    Knew everything within a few days
    Yet I couldn't bare to say anything
    Couldn't bare to listen to your voice's disappointing tone
    Just like always I have messed up again
    Like I always seem to do
    Everyday it hurts more because I know you're lying
    Everyday it eats away at me inside
    I just can't stand to tell you how I feel

    Submitted on 2008-09-30 09:30:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||
      I under stand why itís hard to make such a decision, and with a heart that some of us carry, its hard to be the person that has to cause the pain. A mess none of us should have to go through. It hurts to say something but sometimes it must be done.

    | Posted on 2008-10-13 00:00:00 | by faideddarkness | [ Reply to This ]
      On this one, I am confussed, because you talk about being sad, over some one lying to you, but than you mentioned being sad over what you did. So did you do somthing to make some one lie? Eitherway, its still good. It makes clearly the emotion of a hurt betrayed person, who doesn't know how to tell the betrayer, that you know he is lying. (Wait, I just got it, on what its about). Its good. And like always, it flows smoothly

    Grimm Reaper
    | Posted on 2008-10-11 00:00:00 | by grimmreaper | [ Reply to This ]

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    to Be like written by KeeperOfLight
    Every..... written by jackz
    prison written by ShyOne
    The Unicorn written by BlazeFlamme
    You read free written by poetotoe
    Primitive Lapse written by Crestfallenman
    an unashamed poverty written by Daniel Barlow
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades
    Lilitu written by endlessgame23
    Your Lover written by Cordell
    To the Devil and Candle written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Shi written by ShyOne
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    Etiquette written by saartha
    Formal Jen written by Daniel Barlow
    a mood to be free written by Daniel Barlow
    no words for how graceful you are in this moment written by Daniel Barlow
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Deep Into A World Of Despair written by DeathTone
    phantom limbs written by expiring_touch
    a safe place written by Daniel Barlow
    the living moment written by ShyOne
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (final) written by endlessgame23
    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    i've missed written by mysalvation
    the testing of hypotheses written by Daniel Barlow
    More then just goodbye written by faideddarkness
    Shut Up written by annie0888
    winners circle written by ShyOne
    Physician, Heal Thyself written by WriteSomething




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]