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Watery Thoughts

Author: NixLacus
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Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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Same old same old
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Watery Thoughts

I think back and remember
Remembering my kisses slowly down his neck
His gentle nibbling on my ear
As he whispers the words I wished to hear
His touch so gentle
Feathers delicatly brush over my rosey cheeks
A finger outlines the rubies that are my lips
Then a gentle bite upon my lip
Awakes me from my slumber

As watery memories escape from their pools
As I drown within my watery thoughts
I scream inside to the thump of my heart
Thoughts of why and wonder of how
They take me away
As I just lay there in my bed of pain
Bed of memories, pain, happiness and life
To many thoughts lay within my head
As well as within this bed
I can not bare to leave
Could never bare to see
See the monster I've become
The train wreck he made me
Person she destroyed

Submitted on 2008-09-30 09:33:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This peom clearly describes a crushed person, ruined by a bad relashionship. Thats why I like your poems, cause your really good at taking a event, and desccribing the pain the person feels. Most likely and sadly, you have lived this events, but at least you turned them into somthing good, such as this poem.. Keep writing.

Grimm Reaper
| Posted on 2008-10-11 00:00:00 | by grimmreaper | [ Reply to This ]

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