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I think back and remember Remembering my kisses slowly down his neck His gentle nibbling on my ear As he whispers the words I wished to hear His touch so gentle Feathers delicatly brush over my rosey cheeks A finger outlines the rubies that are my lips Then a gentle bite upon my lip Awakes me from my slumber As watery memories escape from their pools As I drown within my watery thoughts I scream inside to the thump of my heart Thoughts of why and wonder of how They take me away As I just lay there in my bed of pain Bed of memories, pain, happiness and life To many thoughts lay within my head As well as within this bed I can not bare to leave Could never bare to see See the monster I've become The train wreck he made me Person she destroyed |
This peom clearly describes a crushed person, ruined by a bad relashionship. Thats why I like your poems, cause your really good at taking a event, and desccribing the pain the person feels. Most likely and sadly, you have lived this events, but at least you turned them into somthing good, such as this poem.. Keep writing. Grimm Reaper | Posted on 2008-10-11 00:00:00 | by grimmreaper | [ Reply to This ] | |