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    dots Submission Name: Life (Live it)dots

    Author: NixLacus
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 5/11/24
    Words: 225
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       Not well written out nor good grammar or punctuation but it'll do for now; It like that because I wrote in on a napkin in a restaurant.

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    dotsLife (Live it)dots

    Surrounded by the world,
    Staring at the flames before me.
    Singing to no-one.
    Blanking out everyone.
    Blacking out the world before me.
    Dreaming of the days where the unfamiliar will be familiar,
    Thinking of the future,
    The life ahead
    Still to come.
    The fear inside of how long is left,
    Fear of what's to come,
    The thought of if you'll make it.
    Make it in the competition that is life.
    Everyone wanting to play god,
    Or falling at the hands of those who do.
    Wonder deep within of what changes will come,
    Hope that you can cope with what may come.
    So for now,
    How about,
    Live each day,
    As if it may be your last.
    Last chance.
    Say each word loud and clear.
    Live each dream as it comes,
    Comes into your head.
    Fulfill each desire that comes to your fragile heart.
    Cry each tear with pride.
    Feel each pain and learn from it.
    Embrace each happy time,
    Remember, store and enjoy each memory,
    Each happy memory.
    Till that ending day,
    Then you can enjoy and Rest In Peace.
    Embracing the past.
    Just remember everyone is in the same boat,
    It's just that some people live things differently.
    Don't hold a grudge,
    Don't be bitter,
    Just embrace the times.
    Embrace the life.
    Live it large,
    Live it loud,
    But most of all
    Live it!

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      This reminds me of a song. I like it alot. It seems like a relaxing rap poem. its good, and it flows smoothing. And I like how you mentioned that everyone is in the same boat, cause we are, and everybody gets caught up in thinking that they have such a horrible life, when really, everybody does. Somthing horrible, has happened to us all, we just need to relieze it. Its good that you see it.

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    | Posted on 2008-10-11 00:00:00 | by grimmreaper | [ Reply to This ]
      I enjoy this poem, its positive toward the end. thats how i try to live each day and its plesant for the days that i can hold my head high but for the days i can't ijust get threw it and start anew for the next. Relizing that everyone has some sort of problem helps me to under stand thier attitude and make it easer to forgive on my part. it was upbuiding thanks for sharing.

    | Posted on 2008-10-10 00:00:00 | by faideddarkness | [ Reply to This ]

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