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    dots Submission Name: lovely butterfly lovedots
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    Author: BloodtornAngel
    ASL Info:    21/F/inyour wildest dream
    Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 21/28/43
    Words: 53
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    dotslovely butterfly lovedots
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    To be or not to be
    you tell me
    butterflies and rainbows
    can't be all we are
    but honestly
    your dreams
    are haunting
    everything I do
    you may not be here
    that doesn't mean
    you should stop thinking of me
    I think sometimes you take advantage
    of the love I give to you.




    Submitted on 2008-09-30 13:47:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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