The rage of a child
the pain of something more
all his emotions astir
like a whirlwind of rain
so much love
so much hate
hist fist clenched in rage
his eyes close to tears
broken hearted
caught in a lovely trap
designed for anyone but him
as he walks away
I feel like crap
for the lives I've had to take
for the souls I've had to break
I really enjoyed this, there are so many different things you can apply this to in life. Alot of people should be able to relate to this. I'm not sure if that was what you were going for or not, but you should know your writing will help many cope in the years to come. You've done well with this. So simple yet deep all the same! Good Job!
Beautiful, yet Corrupted
Dominique
Submission Name: Lovely traps
