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    dots Submission Name: thunder and lightningdots
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    Author: BloodtornAngel
    ASL Info:    21/F/inyour wildest dream
    Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 21/28/43
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsthunder and lightningdots
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    Beyond beginning and end
    the heart of my friend
    lies broken and trembling
    waiting for answers
    that cannot be given
    never knowing
    the true feelings
    rendering a hole
    so unforgiving
    in this distant heart
    thats so frozen
    never ending
    oceans
    and storms of
    thunder and lightning
    I feel so frightened




    Submitted on 2008-09-30 13:57:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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