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    dots Submission Name: Smile for medots
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    Author: BloodtornAngel
    ASL Info:    21/F/inyour wildest dream
    Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 21/28/43
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 1012
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 500



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    dotsSmile for medots
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    smile
    though the road may wind
    and the storms are strong
    smile
    through the harsh winter
    and the scalding summer
    smile
    I know its hard
    but come her my love
    lay your weary heart
    in mine hands
    I'll care for it and
    let it heal
    but do me a favor
    and
    smile
    open your eyes
    see the world differently
    its a beautiful place
    when you open your heart
    and
    smile




    Submitted on 2008-09-30 13:59:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Angel, You made me smile! I have been reading a lot of your work the past few days. I was suprised at how happy this one made me feel. It flowed along like a happy song I would sing to myself on a rough day. Sweet and tender voice. Thank You
    | Posted on 2008-10-01 00:00:00 | by bigohhh1 | [ Reply to This ]
      This is tender, caring and just plain lovely, Angel! Nice work!
    | Posted on 2008-09-30 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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