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    dots Submission Name: All My Desiresdots
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    Author: faideddarkness
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Idaho
    Elite Ratio:    6.54 - 101/55/50
    Words: 193
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 781
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    Bytes: 1300



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    dotsAll My Desiresdots
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    Oh, all the waters that's crystallizing
    Falling from the sky
    Oh, all the tears from where comfort lies
    The softest cry
    Its not your fault
    You don't have to try
    No need to shout
    I'll be by your side
    If the clouds opened
    And the sky began to fall
    I want to be there
    To catch you when you fall
    Oh, all the waters that's crystallizing
    Falling from the sky
    Oh, all the tears from where comfort lies
    The softest cry
    Just a touch is warmer then
    A thousand fires
    Stealing from the center of my heart
    All my desires
    All the pain you hide
    Berried down inside
    I can feel it so
    Please don't let go
    What's there to be scared
    When I hold this fear
    I will hold you tight
    Ever closer ever nearer
    Just once
    Could I be your light
    In the deepest shadows
    Through the darkest night
    Oh, all the waters that's crystallizing
    Falling from the sky
    Oh, all the tears from where comfort lies
    The softest cry
    Just a touch is warmer then
    A thousand fires
    Stealing from the center of my heart
    All my desires





    Submitted on 2008-09-30 14:39:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love the symbolism
    | Posted on 2008-10-02 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]


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