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    dots Submission Name: I Don't Want You Anymoredots
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    Author: daughterofdeath
    ASL Info:    23/Female/West Virginia
    Elite Ratio:    4.68 - 277/293/232
    Words: 205
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
    Total Views: 488
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    Description:
       This will be the last poem dedicated to this person. He's out of my life, for good.

    Dedication: Chris Lynch


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    dotsI Don't Want You Anymoredots
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    I am now in the part of my life
    when I can let you go,
    although I don't want to.
    But I can realize now
    that you are doing me
    more harm than good.
    So I'll rip my heart
    into the small pieces
    that it has been ripped to before,
    and scatter them around me.
    A shield, to remind myself
    to not get involved with you
    or anyone like you.
    I've done it so many times,
    it seems as if I'll never
    learn my lesson.
    But it's hard for me
    because I don't want to let go.
    I know there will come a time
    when I have to,
    but I just don't want it to come.
    So instead of putting myself through it,
    the waiting, anticipation,
    wondering if maybe I could win your heart,
    I am just leaving it behind.
    I don't want your heart anymore.
    Right now, I don't want
    you anymore.
    You can take you and your heart
    back to Oklahoma.
    Give it back to
    your girlfriend and your son.
    I don't want you
    in my life anymore.
    I have these words
    running through my head.
    But the problem is,
    as much as I want to believe them,
    I know they're not true.




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