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hiding myself from you

Author: truefruit06
ASL Info:    14/m/IN
Elite Ratio:    1.5 - 6 /22 /44
Words: 110
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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IDK my as some call it an 'emo' poem

hiding myself from you

I'm taking myself in and
not coming out
never will i take the chance again

the black world
tightening its grip
not letting me go to my retreat
and keeping me out here

the unseen signs
that I can Really see
I try to keep bound
Yet it keeps coming undone

This never ending depression
spiraling downward and downward
that is what my world is doing
its going all to hell

the unrelenting fear i feel
keeping me out
never seeing my darkness my heart really hold

I Try to go inside
and never come out
never will i take the chance again

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