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my only love/ he be gone


Author: truefruit06
ASL Info:    14/m/IN
Elite Ratio:    1.5 - 6 /22 /44
Words: 98
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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heh my best friend died (or my sorta bf)


my only love/ he be gone



my love of him
is never gone
and It shall never
be away for long
until I'm crying again

as your memories drift away
then come pouring in
my mind comes even closer to shattering
my heart even more broken
and my eyes continous burning

my dreams are all about your arms
your kisses also to
but now they are truly gone forever
just like you
who left me alone

so I guess its time for goodbye
and our times together gone
I promise i will miss you
an i hope you miss me to




Submitted on 2008-10-02 15:27:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I loved your poem because I can relate to it, my best friend died in a car accident last summer. I've noticed some spelling errors, and I think you should rewrite it. Otherwise, I liked it.

Keep on writing, best wishes,

-Allison
| Posted on 2008-10-04 00:00:00 | by revol | [ Reply to This ]


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