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    dots Submission Name: Evangelistdots

    Author: ollie_wicked
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 320/199/89
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
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    He stands there on a chair
    Trying to look you in the eye.
    Giving you the religious scare
    "Do you know where you'll go when you die?"

    Trying my patience,
    Telling me I can't quite hear
    Demanding my repentance.
    But I live without fear.

    Try your scare tactics on another someone.
    You know as much as I do about the after.
    But you know he'll never be done,
    Internally all I'll ever hear is laughter.

    Submitted on 2008-10-02 18:12:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Lol! There's a special place for you in hell! muhuhahaha.
    | Posted on 2013-03-22 00:00:00 | by strike three | [ Reply to This ]

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