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    dots Submission Name: See Me Fall See Me Risedots
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    Author: faideddarkness
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Idaho
    Elite Ratio:    6.53 - 101/55/51
    Words: 348
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
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    dotsSee Me Fall See Me Risedots
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    See me fall/ as the fire gets hotter
    Watch me rise/ as the flames grow higher
    Bring me back/ and I'll run further
    When I'm week/ is when I'm stronger
    I'm standing here on the stage
    Burning under these spot lights
    Rattling out my voice
    Screaming on all night
    Renegading my fingers across these strings
    Feeling the itchy sickness as my skin stings
    My eyes red shot scorching with a blaze
    Adrenalin is pumping as I feed off my rage
    Bone on bone on metal making the noise harder
    Hands reaching to me I can feel the power
    See me fall/ as the fire gets hotter
    Watch me rise/ as the flames grow higher
    Bring me back/ and I'll run further
    When I,m week/ is when I,m stronger
    I,m bleeding into every pull of the string
    Every voice echoing in my head going ring, ring
    There's evil in my veins that'll never let me dream
    Every depressing moment left open making me scream
    See me fall/ as the fire gets hotter
    Watch me rise/ as the flames grow higher
    Bring me back/ and I'll run further
    When I'm week/ is when I'm stronger
    Winding down on the neck of this old guitar
    Feeling my heart beating under old wounded scars
    Memories invading and haunting please let me hide
    Kicking and beating the ground I'll stand for my side
    Face to face with the monster in the mirror
    I may be a loser but I'm a winner in his stare
    Climbing higher building into my every fear
    Tearing down these four walls disproving what you may hear
    See me fall/ as the fire gets hotter
    Watch me rise/ as the flames grow higher
    Bring me back/ and I'll run further
    When I'm week/ is when I'm stronger
    watch me fall, I'm fallen, I'm fallen, I'm fallen down
    But watch me rise, watch me rise, I'll go higher, I'm going further
    I may be weak but I'm only getting stronger
    See me fall/ as the fire gets hotter
    Watch me rise/ as the flames grow higher





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