PEACE by layDsayD

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Submission Name: PEACE dots

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Author:	layDsayD
ASL Info:	25/f/florida
Elite Ratio:	3.1 - 225/230/121
Words:	57

Class/Type:	Poetry/Depressed
Total Views:	37
Average Vote:	5.0000
Bytes:	288

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PEACE

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Blankets of satin , white heat ,glass sweats on a bed side table. There is no brilliant sunset or calm before the storm. It waits .quietly watching. I some times can elude it as I have tonight. But I know it is patient. And soon I will gently lay my weary head in its boney hands.

Submitted on 2008-10-04 01:45:59 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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LayD, This one is a bit short but to the point. The blankets of satin, white heat made me think there was going to be a passion play on words. Where the glass sweats on a bedside table part reminded me of my drinking days I could picture that glass perfectly. The rest of it made me think of a saying a mentor of mine said to me once.... He said " John you know that feeling of impending doom?..... Thats Impending doom." lol
| Posted on 2008-10-06 00:00:00 | by bigohhh1 | [ Reply to This ]

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