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    dots Submission Name: BEDTIME WRITINGSdots
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    Author: layDsayD
    ASL Info:    29/f/florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 264/243/147
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
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       FUNNY AS I GO THROUGH THESE OLD ONES IT FEELS LIKE A DIARY EVEN THOUGH I DONT WRITE ABOUT MYSELF MUCH I CAN RECALL WHAT WAS GOING ON WHEN I WROTE THEM WEIRD


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    dotsBEDTIME WRITINGSdots
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    No designer sheet in the world could make this bed mine.
    Am I lonely or just alone?
    May be it is kinder to be quiet.
    I have always found myself to be poetic
    Having a flair for words, imagery.
    But these days I find it hard to write enough to mask this pain.
    I tell me its all in my head.
    Perhaps it is.
    I cant make myself sleep past an hour anymore.
    I have ink stains on my pillow.
    I just lie here among bits of paper and crumbled thoughts.
    Its no wonder all the best were insane .




    Submitted on 2008-10-04 01:52:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      made crazy by their own sense of purpose and the ability to communicate........ never be too quiet, the written word can shout as loud as any voice........ simple, poignant, beautiful.
    | Posted on 2008-10-04 00:00:00 | by col13x | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice write, lovely lady! I don't think we choose to write; instead, it chooses us, and it is a very demanding mistress!
    | Posted on 2008-10-04 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      A victim of insperation, a slave to my passion,
    and seduced by an epiphany.
    I have no choice but to pull out my pen
    and lord help me let the writting begin.

    No, not insane, I call it (Poet's Affliction)
    I get out of my bed and go to my computer,
    and say aloud Now what?
    Nice write,

    The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2008-10-04 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]
      All the best were insane, that's right. That's what makes me one of the best, right? :D

    No, seriously, I loved this. I can relate. I used to have ink stains on my pillow too. I used to suffer from insomnia.

    This piece was really well written. Good job, and keep on writing.

    -Allison
    | Posted on 2008-10-04 00:00:00 | by revol | [ Reply to This ]


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