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    dots Submission Name: .:Thinking:.dots
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    Author: Timmy S. Edgar
    ASL Info:    38 male Melb, Australia
    Elite Ratio:    2.6 - 263/200/71
    Words: 239
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Longing
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    Thinking of thoughts, about my life's memories...
    Synapses established, recollection align; retrieved!
    My mind races, things I've done or are about too...
    Visualise in your mind, pics of my youth; perceived.


    I Think
    Childhood days
    Ice cold swimming holes!
    Crystal clear waterfalls...
    Rainforrest's dew mist...
    Humiditys reatreat
    My santuary!

    I Think
    Adolesence aquired
    Our first kiss xxx!
    The smell of your wet hair...
    Moss covered rock; nervous, we sit...
    Gentle touch, goose bump rush...
    My First Love!

    Dreams and desires are valid needs in life required...
    For my holy grail; is to meet and full fill each one!
    Thoughts populate, towards things that are dreamt...
    Future spiritual requirements, my internal Don Juan.


    I Think
    Adulthood and Beyond
    That wonderful Lady; My soul mate, i haven't met...
    Financial Security, Impressive property portfolio...
    Personal wealth and the means beyond...
    Children and children and then some, they grow...
    My most fundamental desire!

    I Think
    The Golden Years; Retirement
    That wonderful lady; My soul mate; My eternal life partner!
    Comfortable and secure lifestyles, in love, in life together...
    Family tree; Gifts for grand kids, birthdays and Christmas...
    Extended sun drenched holidays, sleeping in late; brunch...
    My mind thinks; to manifest my families happiness!



    Timmy S. Edgar 2008








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