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    dots Submission Name: Part One : Insanitydots
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    Author: RJMajestic
    ASL Info:    26/M/WA
    Elite Ratio:    0.93 - 0/0/2
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsPart One : Insanitydots
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    A pointless life of intolerable normalities
    Every day is another lost
    Full of hopeless thoughts
    Reaching for a new end
    Or the old beginning
    In a heart of unrealized compassion
    A mind of unwanted hate
     
    The dysfunctional life of the dysfunctional nobody
    No time to waste
    Or useless not-wasted time
    A portable soul of deadly distress
    With nowhere to go
    Who cares?
     
    The endless destruction of endless potential
    A silence of no dreams
    A realistic fantasy
    A silent reality
    Trying to live through a death
    More commonly known as insanity
     
    Robert Majestic
    11-23-97 7:30pm




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