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    dots Submission Name: The gray areadots
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    Author: dancer06
    ASL Info:    20/f
    Elite Ratio:    4.74 - 232/171/43
    Words: 171
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 28
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1120



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    dotsThe gray areadots
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    How many things in life are black and white?
    What happened to all those gray areas?
    Good and bad.
    Right and wrong.
    The difference in beliefs.

    The difference between Rock and Christian music.
    The belief between Gods.
    Beautiful and ugly
    Living and dying.
    That gray area in between.

    Believing in love and hate
    Happy and sad.
    Up and down.
    Right or left.
    Heaven or hell.

    What makes it so cut and dry?
    What if I fall into that gray area?
    That area where I am neither right nor wrong
    I am not beautiful or ugly.
    I am here on earth, and not heaven or hell.

    Why must people judge
    Based solely on black or white?
    Can't have my cake and eat it too?
    I can't just be me, not happy or sad.
    I can't go right because I'm too far left.

    I like this gray area.
    This land of the unknown.
    I hate this judgement
    Because people don't believe
    In the gray, where my life rests.




    Submitted on 2008-10-04 06:08:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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