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    dots Submission Name: WARPAINTdots
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    Author: layDsayD
    ASL Info:    29/f/florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 264/243/147
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Depressed
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    A perfect innocence just years ago .
    Before the tainted times dyed her hair black
    Before she was masked in brilliant shades of blue and green .
    Twisted currents of time pass before her now.
    I believe in her mystery .
    Fall victim to it.
    She is entirely mine .
    Everything past is like war paint to us now.
    A symbolic vision of strength and hate.




    Submitted on 2008-10-04 12:22:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      stands on its own, nicely done
    | Posted on 2008-10-04 00:00:00 | by col13x | [ Reply to This ]
      Anyone ever tell you,
    you have a way with words.

    good write, good night.


    The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2008-10-04 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]


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