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    Author: col13x
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    Remedies

    If I ever discover the essence of happiness
    I am going to bottle it
    just like a Bach flower remedy
    happiness in little brown bottles with yellow labels
    then Iíll stand on some street corner
    handing out free samples

    People could then take it home
    and pour it into a burner
    and the fragrance of happiness
    will fill their homes
    they will be reminded of it forever

    If I could do the same with sleep
    it would be great
    I could do with some sleep right now




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