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    dots Submission Name: Lovedots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsLovedots
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    Love

    With the magnitude of the space in my heart
    I will give you more
    than love can command





    Submitted on 2008-10-04 17:38:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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