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    Author: col13x
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    400 Billion Stars ( The Meaning Of Messiah )

    400 billion stars
    And only one of them has a name
    400,000,000,000,000 stars
    The numbers mean nothing I know
    Yet doesnít it touch something
    Something just beyond your grasp
    Say it, ďFour hundred billion stars.Ē
    ďAnd all we know is one.Ē

    400 billion stars in one Galaxy alone
    And more than a billion, billion Galaxies are known
    The numbers mean nothing Iím sure
    But the feeling that you know this
    Lays somewhere in your grip
    Expansive, overwhelming, somewhere in your concept
    You touch the infinite

    Canít you, donít you feel it
    Some how
    Some where
    You know, you know this

    400 billion stars
    And I am just a human
    400,000,000,000,000 stars
    In a moments breath a single life time
    Saying I know the years mean something
    Yet do they touch anything
    Centuries of dust I can hold in my grasp
    Just like four hundred billion stars
    And all we know is sun

    And a life time and nothing
    And the space in-between
    400,000,000,000,000 stars must tell us something
    In one Galaxy alone
    And a billion, billion Galaxies are known
    The numbers mean nothing
    But can you just feel that feeling
    Somewhere deep in your soul

    Four hundred billion stars in one single creation
    400,000,000,000,000 stars for each of a universal nation
    And they say the mind cannot grasp
    The meaning of Messiah

    And so what is life beneath the sun
    Or between the dark
    And what have we seen or begun
    One world circling
    One star drifting
    Amidst the billions

    Forget everything that you think you know
    For a moment
    Forget the world
    Turn your thoughts and your eyes skyward
    And know
    400 billion stars circle you like a crown
    And only one of them has a name
    And the truth and the unfathomable point
    For a moment
    Lays like dust in your palm
    400,000,000,000,000 stars

    And in the breath and in the seconds
    And in all the aching yearning questions
    We know
    Four hundred billion stars in one single creation
    Infinite-Eternity in the Galaxies of this Universal Nation
    And they say that the mind cannot conceive
    And the eyes cannot see
    Nor the heart contain
    Or the flesh remain
    Neither emotion or the mathematics
    Not intuition or the souls of humans being so pragmatic
    Can envision 400 billion stars

    Four hundred billion stars I touch
    400,000,000,000,000 stars for each and every one of us
    400 billion stars lay like dust
    In your flesh, in your eyes, in your mind, in your soul, in your palm
    And they say that we just cannot grasp
    The meaning of Messiah




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