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    dots Submission Name: Paying The Billdots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 240
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsPaying The Billdots
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    Paying The Bill

    You may come to this some day
    It may issue from nowhere
    A moment that is not strident
    A lose flagging half remembrance
    Something which neither carries
    Nor contains
    But a fickle shadow
    Thin and as meaningless with an empty whimper
    Not to enlighten or to comfort
    It will seep from you

    As if a blank half tactile memory
    Has produced a languid thud
    Which lays in your chest a solitary clue
    To nothing
    Not to carry you high
    No
    Nor to crystallise some point or thought in time
    Yes, nor to strip or burn with poignancy
    But to hang immobile, slaughtered
    Indefinable by its eclipse
    Not cold, neither warm
    As it surges through your blood

    Yes
    You may come to this
    Which does not ache or grip
    Yet sinks through a festering
    Which hangs between a single drip of life
    It will not betray or illuminate
    So
    Here it comes to tear at you
    Without hope or hopelessness
    For its ballad is sung by no one
    And you may shutter your eye in half a dream
    And love will come to you eventually

    For it will hang in your throat unspoken
    While the jagged cushion molests
    So the bones without vacant marrow
    May sequester what is left
    Hand over hand but empty
    Starving to death with everything
    Yes
    You may come to this




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